PROMISE
by
Nang Cho Mar Myint
(2)
(A 30 years old gambler must faithful his friend, if not he will meet with trouble.)
My Blog: (www.nangchomarmyint.blogspot.com)
Date: 1 Oct 2012
Notes:
Have you submitted in blackboard? YES / NO
Have you emailed the lecturer yet? YES / NO
lecturer: jeannette teo
email: syteo@nafa.edu.sg
EXECUTIVE SUMMARY:
TITLE:
PROMISE
GENRE:
Drama
1 SENTENCE SUMMARY:
A 30 years old gambler must faithful his friend, if not he will meet with trouble.
SYNOPSIS:
(Synopsis
of your story here –2-3 para, double spaced)
CHARACTER LIST (All
characters)
Key
character Harry
Character Jame
Character Lucky
CHARACTER BIO (Key
Characters only)
(Character
bio here – abt half A4 Page)
RESEARCH
(Newspaper clippings, magazine articles,
blog, etc etc - Photocopies/Scan)
REFLECTION
(reflection
paper – what have I learnt so far – 2 to 3 para, double spaced)
3 ACT STRUCTURE: (in point form
below)
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ACT1 SETUP
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ACT2 CONFRONTATION
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ACT3 RESOLUTION
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Key Character(s):
Must-have Info:
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Confrontation:
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Climax (Grand Finale):
Resolution:
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MOTIVE: If he kill the dog, he will be in trouble.
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TURNING POINT:
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MOTIVE RESOLVED?
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Conflict/Obstacles:
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Conflict/Obstacles:
Up the Stakes:
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Moral of the Story if any:
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TREATMENT / STORYLINE
Once upon a time, there is a poor young man and a gambler called Harry. He do as a site worker and live in a very small hut. He is the one who love to go gambling everyday. It is the reason, that he is poor. After his work he go gambling with his best friend, Jame. They go gambling together and always lose together. One day, Jame ask him to loan him
money because he doesn't have money to gamble and he promise him to give back the next day. Harry give Jame his money and let him play. That night they fiasco all their money. The next day, Jame fall down from the 20th floor at his construction and past away. Harry feel very sad for his best friend.
At the night Jame past away Harry has a wonderful dream. In his dream, he meet with a small dog and the dog follow him all the way. Suddenly, the dog talk to Harry that he want to stay with him. The dog also talk a very strange words, it said " I am your friend Jame, aren't you remember me? I have a debt on you, so i come and give you back.
Please take me home with you and I promise, you will get a benefit for this." After this, he wake up from his dream, he cannot sleep back.
After a few week he forget his dream about Jame and he pass his day as usual. One night, when he come back from casino, a black puppy follow him. Although he try to make the puppy go away, it keep follow him. Suddenly, he remember the dream that he had, so he accept the puppy to follow him and take it together to home. After the day that the puppy arrive his home, his faith become higher. He get promote in his work and he win a lot in gambling. So, he named to dog " Lucky". After a few week, he become a billion-er ,so he buy a new house, a car and so on. He feed Lucky as his son and he love it so much. As he become a billioner a lots of girl like him and he got a girlfriend called Sara. His girlfriend is not a pet lover. One day, his girlfriend ask him that she want to follow his house. So, he is confusing to call her to his house. But Sara keep talking about this and she said if he doesn't allow her, she will broke with him. So, he has no choice and he allow her to come his house.
Today is the day, that Sara will come to his house, he is so exciting. And he afraid Sara will angry if she see his Lucky. That why he try to hide the dog. While he is thinking about this, he hear a bell and he know that it is Sara. He open the door for her and they have dinner together. Sara said, she want to look around his house. And she see the dog and she
start angry. She said, " Harry, you know i really hate pat, especially dog and why you keep it in you house, why? why?" He don't know what to answer. And she continue," When i come next time, i don't want to see this dog anymore, so please throw away now." Harry got a shock. He can't throw away his dog. It is his best friend, how come he can throw away. Sara talk to him " if you don't throw it now, I will never meet you again and let break". Harry doesn't want to lose her, she is the first girl that he fall in love in his life. So, he decided to throw away Luck to the drain from his house. Then, he say sorry to Lucky and throw it all the way down.
He dream a wonderful dream again and it is a nightmare. The dog come to him and said " why you so cruel? How come you can so vicious on me? You will pay for this, you should pay for your betray on your best friend because of a girl. The next day, when he go gambling he fiasco in casino and he become a poor again. The day that he sell his house, his car and his things, Sara go away from him. Finally he got regret and he mad.
SCRIPT (max 5 pages – pls see brief)
FADE IN:
ACT 1 (SETUP)
SCENE 1: INT – NAFA
CLASSROOM 5-24 – DAY
Write what you see here –
this is for visuals…. For example: STUDENT1, STUDENT2, STUDENT3, OTHER STUDENTS
are looking at the projector screen. Screen shows the teacher’s blog -
instructions. Some students are frantically writing their scripts in a last
minute frenzy to finish up their work. Those who have finished and are ready to
submit, are waiting patiently for further instructions.
NARRATOR
It’s almost time to hand in
the final Assignment! Class DM 2B & 2C are dying to finish up and hand in
their beloved scripts!
TEACHER waves and calls for
students to focus.
ME
(pointing to projector
screen)
Do you see the new template?
It’s on the nafawrites download page…
STUDENT1
Where? I can’t find it!!!
STUDENT2
URGH! AARRGGH!
What template? We’ve got a
template to use?
STUDENT3
Why so troublesome ah?
ME
Because I say so. DOWNLOAD
your new template NOW.
STUDENT1
Where? Help!
STUDENT2
(pointing at the web address
on the screen)
It’s here! See?
STUDENT1
Oooooooooooh! Ok, thanks!
ME
Finished? Downloaded yet?
STUDENT1
Nooooo!! Wait for me!
(pause)
OK!! I’m ready!
ME
Now, fill in the template with your details and your work. Copy your work and
paste into the new template.
(pause)
Every page must have your
name, student number and page number – see top left, header.
The cover page MUST have
your 1 sentence summary. It’s repeated inside. Why? The 1 sentence on the cover
is your selling statement, the one inside is to explain what your story is all
about.
(SFX: Students typing
frantically)
Compile into one doc file
& email to me! Then select all, copy and paste your work into your blogs to
backup.
Students are looking at the
projector screen and the teacher’s blog. Some are frantically writing their
scripts in a last minute frenzy to finish up their work. The others are
transferring their work into the new template and into their blogs.
SCENE 2 – INT – NAFA
CLASSROOM 5-25 – DAY
STUDENT4
& STUDENT5 are in 5-25 are looking into class 5-24.
STUDENT4
Wah look at them!
STUDENT5
Look at what?
STUDENT4
See, the students next door
are so hardworking!! And what are we doing?
STUDENT5
We’re rushing also la! Hurry
up and help me…
STUDENT4
k..k…
